Not a C/S/Z fan at all, heh. But still enjoyed reading this. What makes me laugh is Seph in his insane bad-ass-ness says 'Because Cloud, you are a puppet', and yet that's precisely how Jenova uses him. ^.~

Ah, love the evil Seph.

Was a bit confused about the present tense at first though. 'It was the humming' - should it be 'It is the humming'? Anyway, the present tense adds to the insanity, so like it. <3